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Naruto: The Demons Revenge Ch1

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WHAM!
Naruto Uzumaki’s was thrown backwards by the punch from his team mate Sasuke Uchiha and Naruto hit the tree behind him with a sickening crunch.
“Hmm.” Their sensei, Kakashi looked up from his book, Icha Icha Tactics and sighed. “Looks like Sasuke beat Naruto, again.”

“Yeah! Way to go, Sasuke-kun!” Cried Sakura. ‘Oh, he is sooooo awesome!’ She thought admiringly. ‘And he’s even cuter when he’s tired! Not the Naruto put up much of a fight. Look, Sasuke-kun’s not even breaking a sweat!’

Naruto shakingly dragged himself to his feet. “This training fight’s not over yet!” He gasped. “Believe it!” Sasuke rolled his eyes. Naruto ran hard at Sasuke, but he was injured and worn out. Narutos badly placed punch didn’t even land. Sasuke’s arm just shot up and blocked it. Quickly, Sasuke used his other arm to grab Naruto and flip him over. He hit the ground at an impossible speed, and Kakashi winced.

“Owch, Naruto. Really, this fights up. Sasuke wins.” Sasuke smirked and walked over to where Naruto lay, face down and shuddering on the ground. Normally, he would just walk away without a word but Naruto was really beginning to annoy him lately. He just couldn’t resist the temptation to take the mickey out of him.

“Just face it loser. You’re never gonna beat me. Never. You’re hopeless. A failure. You can’t even perform a simple fire-ball jutsu.”

‘Hmmm.’ Thought Kakashi. ‘ The Fire-ball jutsu isn’t at all simple. Sasuke can’t really perform it himself.’ But he kept his mouth shut and waited to see how this would turn out. If only Kakashi had known then, what this little argument would result in. If he had, Kakashi would’ve stepped in then and there.

‘Just give up, misfit. You’re never gonna become Hokage, or even graduate to chunnin. Why don’t you just quit now, cause next time I mightn’t be so easy on you. Loser.’ Sasuke sneered at Narutos inert form, and turned to walk away. The first thing he saw was his sensei’s face. He was shocked, because Kakashis eyes were wide, and suddenly he called out to Sasuke.

“Quick Sasuke! Get away from him!’

‘Hah’. Though Sasuke. ‘Walk away from a fight? Never!’
He turned on the spot and looked back at his team mate.

~~~Narutos Point Of View~~~

Words echoed around Narutos head, like Sasuke was repeating them again and again right next to his ear

Loser.                      Loser.               Loser.             Loser.
Hopeless.       Hopeless.      Hopeless.      Hopeless.
Quit.   Quit.   Quit.   Quit.
Misfit.     Misfit.    Misfit.    Misfit.

Just thinking about Sasuke made him mad. Why couldn’t he beat him? It drove him crazy. Naruto gasped in pain suddenly. His hand grasped his abdomen, and a squeezed his eyes shut, as if he was trying to block out the pain.
What is this? He thought though the haze of pain. What’s happening?

Suddenly, he screamed. To the onlookers, the scream sounded more beast than man. Naruto opened his eyes, breathing heavily. He looked down at his fingers. More specifically, he looked at his fingernails. But they were no longer fingernails. They were claws.
What? What’s happening to me?! Thought Naruto, panicking. He cried out in pain again, as he actually felt the whisker-like marks on his cheeks become more pronounced and jagged. He could feel his spiky hair growing longer, and when it passed his eyes, he saw that it was no longer bright yellow, but a reddy-brown. He still had his head down but suddenly he looked up and saw two bright tails of flame spiralling around his body on the ground. He had not realised it, but he was sitting up, resting back on his hind legs. Huh? Those are my legs! Not my hind legs! What am I thinking?!

The flames surrounding him continued to circle higher and higher, like fiery whips.

~~~Sasuke’s Point Of View~~~

Naruto was sitting on the ground, with columns of flame whirling around him. Sasuke was shocked as he saw that Narutos whisker like marks on his cheeks showed up more than ever, and that his fingernails had turned into things that more resembled talons.  He gasped and stepped back as he saw Narutos hair brow longer, turn red and his eyes widened even more as he realised that some of his bangs were hanging down in front of his eyes, but the rest of them were spiked up into two points on Narutos head, points that looked suspiciously like...well…ears. Naruto was shaking badly, and when he screamed in pain, it chilled Sasuke to his bones.

“RUN!” Cried Kakashi “RUN AND GET OUT OF HERE AS FAST AS YOU CAN!” it scared Sasuke more than anything else to here the fear and panic in his teachers voice. “GET THE THIRD HOKAGE AND ALL THE OTHER NINJA AND TELL THEM ITS NARUTO! TELL THEM THAT IT’S HAPPENING, THE SEALS BREAKING!”

What’s happening? What seal’s breaking? His thoughts were interrupted, and even then, with all the other noise going on, Sasuke heard Kakashi whisper “No…it’s too late. Far too late for us.”

For at that moment, just when Sasuke looked at Naruto again, Naruto looked up. His teeth were more like fangs now, and spit was dripping from his jaws. But Sasuke didn’t notice that. He was looking right into Narutos eyes, and what he saw hit Sasuke like a thunderbolt. Narutos eyes were no longer bright blue, but a deep, devilish red and his pupils were slitted like a cats.

~~~Narutos Point Of View~~~

Suddenly, thought all the confusion and the pain, a word echoed round his head again.

Loser.

His head snapped up, and as he saw Sasuke’s wide and fearful eyes, bloodlust ran though him and adrenalin pumped his heart. He bared his teeth menacingly, and leapt to his feet. All the pain and fatigue he had been feeling moments before were gone, replaced with a terrible thirst for blood. Sasuke’s blood. Narutos eyes narrowed, and he smiled. An icy, deadly, bloodthirsty smile. Now it was time to have some fun! Well, fun for him at least.
This is just a little day dream that I was having a while ago... heh heh also i really think its cool when Naruto transforms, they should use it more often in the TV series.

Please comment, and correct me if there's anything i'm wrong about.

Chapter 1-here
Chapter 2-[link]

I dont own Naruto, Kakashi, Sasuke, Sakura or idears such as the nine tailed fox, or the 'jutsu' art. dont sue me!!! :D

lol Kakashi's reading Icha Icha Tactics!!
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Bluekuni's avatar
oh, this is SOO good, you should atleast continue on with this!!

i make naruto fan fics as well <3